Protective Glow Around Critique The First Paragraph Of My Novel?

Critique the first paragraph of my novel? - protective glow around

I'm looking for opinions / constructive criticism. Please note, I am erst 16 This novel is set in an old world type of institution.

Chapter One Start: A painful.
The fresh air of the night passed Threshton village. A glimmer of gold outline around the branches of the forest in the area, love of nature sculpture. The distant mountains enveloped observed a protective embrace of the whole community, and intrigue. The peaceful face of the moon smiled, looking exactly here and there.
No motion was present or observed from a distance, but a radiance surrounded the local pub. Cheers. Racous notes. Loud. The villagers merrily as was another victim of a bottle of oil on their heads and a case of concussion, to complement the growing list of academic medical patients. And yet, a good hour.
The impact broke out, when suddenly a small, stocky, wearing under-, size of glass shards and the beautiful bar. He was a painfullyfew meters away. Sharp pull glass strewn all around him, criticizing his face to remind you. He did it with a resolute manner, while not worn on his pants and the friction needed to break in order to preserve a little dignity.
Pausing to remove a piece of glass from a very bad, she went to the salon, a pointer to the charge.
"Now this was very rude not to, he said, his voice trembling with anger.